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Camilia
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MAG : 2
Glyph: Torrent

MP Cost: 20

Element(s): Water

Range: Medium upon Casting, Extremely Short upon Detonation

Description:A very simple trapping spell, Camilia's torrent glyph works like any glyph spell would. Camilia targets a solid surface within twenty feet of herself, causing a Simple glyph to appear across that surface. This glyph is rather easy to spot, as it is a foot long and  glows with a blue light-which extends to the area five feet around it, serving as the indicator of its effective range. Once a physical stimulant enters this range a massive torrent of pressurized water is released from the glyph, dealing moderate low damage to anyone caught within the torrent. This torrent is launched out around twenty feet away from the glyph, losing 10% of its effectiveness-up to a maximum of 50%-for every two feet away from the glyph the torrent moves.


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Monte
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MAG : -
The spell is worded frivolously. Try to be succinct, as to be courteous to those who would read it, be it a staff member or a fellow member.

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The user conjures a glyph within twenty feet of themselves that faintly glows blue. This light extends five feet outwards, and is an indicator for the effect range. Once a physical stimulant enters the range, pressurized water is released in all directions that deals low-moderate damage, decreasing in effectiveness by 10% for every 2 feet traveled, to a maximum decrease of 50% and spreading up to twenty feet outwards. Once cast, lasts indefinitely until triggered.

This is an example of the level one skill. However, due to the copious amounts of extra wording, there might be an effect I missed. Please 'trim the fat', so to speak.

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Camilia
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It has been edited, I hope this is acceptable now?

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Monte
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Your first spell has two effects, dealing damage and having the caster being unaffected by the spell. It may only have one per spell level.

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Camilia
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Nixed it

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Monte
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The first level is Approved.

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Monte
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Unapproved. Please conform to the new rules. (remove spell levels)

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Camilia
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Levels have been removed

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Monte
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Approved.

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