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Liandry
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The Valkyrie
Post Count : 48
MAG : 5
Name: Hera's Guidance

Lvl. 1 Effect
MP Cost:15
Element(s):Cure
Range:Touch
Description: Liandry is able to quickly heal a moderate average amount of health in one post.

Lvl. 2 Effect
MP Cost:50
Element(s):Cure/Light
Range:Touch
Description: Liandry is able to quickly heal a low major amount of health in one post.

This also will remove/weaken negative aliments of equal cost and lower the effects of greater cost aliments.

Lvl. 3 Effect
MP Cost: 85 mp
Element(s): Cure
Range: Touch
Description:

Liandry is able to quickly heal a moderately extreme amount of health in one post.

Afterwards the person she has healed gain a moderate Major defense buff for five post afterwards.

In addition the person will be healed for additional high moderate amount of health over the course of three posts afterwards.


Last edited by Liandry on February 19th 2017, 4:01 am; edited 4 times in total

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STR 5 | AGI 3 | CON 3 | MAG 5 | SYN 0 || Level 3
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Gemini
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Post Count : 43
I'd suggest slightly raising the cost on the second two levels. While it is somewhat balanced by the fact that she has to come into contact with them to use the spell, I'd still say the effects of the buffs are a bit too much for the cost, though that might just be me.

About 10 or 15 more MP should suffice. Either that or you could give it a minor nerf such as lowering the duration a little.

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Liandry
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The Valkyrie
Post Count : 48
MAG : 5
alrightly

I upped the cost of the first one by 15

and upped the second level one by 10

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STR 5 | AGI 3 | CON 3 | MAG 5 | SYN 0 || Level 3
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Gemini
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Post Count : 43
Approved.

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Gemini
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Post Count : 43
Upon further consideration, you'll need to alter this. You have too many effects. It's supposed to be like this:

Lvl 1: One effect
Lvl 2: One upgraded (or same) effect, additional effect
Lvl 3: One upgraded (or same) effect, two additional effects
Example:
Lvl 1: Fireball
Lvl 2: Fireball that debuffs
Lvl 3: Fireball that debuffs and does status effect

Please remove some effects. Also, you need to define the amount healed with percentages.

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Liandry
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The Valkyrie
Post Count : 48
MAG : 5
edited and adjust power to compensate a bit

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STR 5 | AGI 3 | CON 3 | MAG 5 | SYN 0 || Level 3
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Liandry
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The Valkyrie
Post Count : 48
MAG : 5
bump

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STR 5 | AGI 3 | CON 3 | MAG 5 | SYN 0 || Level 3
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Hoshiko
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Site Owner
Post Count : 339
MAG : 5
Please conform to the new changes.

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