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Annalise
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Trinity Skill
Name: Dual-Cast
Effects: Allows two spells to be cast in one action.
Element(s): N/A
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: 3 posts.


Skill Lvl. 1
Name: Essence Reaper
Effects: Contact with any of Annalise's spells or physical attacks, mark opponents with a curse. This curse burns 20 MP per post, up to five posts (AoE spells that hit multiple enemies apply this skill on those applicable).
Element(s): N/A
Duration:  5 Posts
Cooldown: 5 Posts cool down


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Hoshiko
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Skill 1: Too strong, I think. I would say preventing resource gain should be gotten rid of completely, since it's too broad.

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Annalise
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Edited

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Main Theme: Sensuous Gatherings | Conflict: Sexual Frustration
"Chaos and Freedom are the natural laws for the universe, be it man, woman, demon, or angel. I bind myself by my choices, not to the morality and rules of others."

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Hoshiko requested I take over this approval.

The flaw with your skill is that it operates under the presumption that a Level 1 skill is significantly weaker than a Level 6 skill, when all skills are equal in strength.

Based on Hoshi's previous post, I noticed you wanted resource prevention. While you cannot prevent all resources from being prevented, you can focus on one per skill. For example, you can lock a temporarily lock a mana pool. Would you like to focus on this idea or move on with a different concept?

Let me know what you'd like to do and we'll do our best to make it work.

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Annalise
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I would like to focus on this idea. What else can I add to this in order to make it better?

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Annalise
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Edited

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Main Theme: Sensuous Gatherings | Conflict: Sexual Frustration
"Chaos and Freedom are the natural laws for the universe, be it man, woman, demon, or angel. I bind myself by my choices, not to the morality and rules of others."

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Belal
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Please refrain from double posting.

For the current ability, you're going to have to specify the mark left on their body. The shape, design, size, etc.

Is it possible to remove the mark through physical and/or magical means? If not, you need to define how you track them to allow for counterplay e.g., echolocation.

For the draining effect, I'd personally recommend a 5 post duration, and the cool-down would be determined by how much MP you want to drain.

If you want a 3 post CD, raise the drain to 15 MP.
If you want a 5 post CD, raise the drain to 20 MP.
If you want a 10 post CD, raise the drain to 35 MP.

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Annalise
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Sorry for that. Edited

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Belal
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To clarify, this is a triggered skill. Once it is activated, you have 5 posts for these effects to take place. When the duration is over, even if you had just marked someone, the skill ends.

Additionally, abilities may only have one effect. You're going to have to choose between tracking or the MP drain. Personally, I'd opt for the latter, but if choose tracking, we will buff it accordingly.

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Annalise
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Edited and chose to keep MP drain over tracking.

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Belal
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Approved, yo.

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Hoshiko
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Unapproved due to changes. Please remove trinity skill.

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