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Post by Zeferoth on April 24th 2013, 8:41 pm

Name: Dragon Star

Size: Trailer/Midsize Truck

Type: Long Range Fighter

Appearance: Dragon Star AnimeFighter_zps459c23e0

Total Processing Units: 20 units

Speed: 200mph

Weapons: Twin Gatling Lazers

Commander: Zeferoth Chaosu

Crew: Zeferoth and Sheroko

Passangers: 2


Spoiler:
Name: Twin Gatling Lazers

Processing Units: 10 (for the pair)

Weight: Medium

Effect: The gatling lazers fire fire a bunch of small fast moving lazers out of the six barrles as they rotate. The gatling lazers can only be fired for a total of 20 lazer burst before having a 1 post cool down time.

Fire Rate: 20 shots per posts

Ammo: 500

Appearance: Two mid-sized miniguns in front of and slightly to the side of the cockpit.

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Name: Deflecter Sheilds

Processing Units: 5

Effect: Deafault setting is that the sheild is dispersed all around the ship. The sheilds can be shifted to better protect a single side of the ship.

Durability: When the shields are evenly dispersed they can take 10 glancing shots and 5 direct shots from medium strength weapons before breaking. When one side is reinforced it takes an additional 5 shots to break. It will take one post to fully divert power to one location.

Downside: When one side is reinforced with the sheilds the other three sides are exposed to direct hull damage. It would only take 10 hits to any other side before the ship is too damaged to continue.

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Name: Mid-Ranged Radar

Processing Units: 5

Effect: Can detect ships a couple hundred yards away (still don't know if thats accurate)

Durability: 10 hits before destroyed (if unprotected by sheilds)

Downside: It is unable to detect ships with cloaking abilities, and if there is too much interfeirance it is usless (asteroids radiation space debries ect.)



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Post by Zihark on April 24th 2013, 10:21 pm

Do you want your fighter to be able to combat other Gummi Ships or enemies?

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Post by Zeferoth on April 24th 2013, 10:34 pm

yes i do. I thought I had to make the weapons and sheilds seperate, so I just made the ship itself.

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Post by Zihark on April 24th 2013, 10:42 pm

Nah, they go together.

Bump when you're ready.

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Post by Zeferoth on April 25th 2013, 11:35 am

edited

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Post by Zihark on April 25th 2013, 12:26 pm

Use the appropriate template kept in spoilers for this section.

The shield is incredibly underpowered. You can shoot 100 rounds a second, and your shield can only take 10 shots. You can increase the damage that the can protect.

Also, describe the shots they can take. 10 shots from a light, medium, or heavy weapon.

The shield as also underpowered and easily destroyable. Basically, if someone spends more processing units to cloak themselves, then you can't detect them.

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Post by Zeferoth on April 25th 2013, 12:37 pm

1. Am I still suppost to keep template seperat? Cause I used the right ones just put them all together. Thats how you made it sound.

2. I guess the sheild can protect 100 light attacks 30 medium attacks, or 10 heavy attacks before they break.


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Post by Zihark on April 25th 2013, 12:39 pm

1 The weapons templates belong inside of the weapons section. Make sure the template looks like the template provided to you.

Use the word or, not and. Any amount of damage would do the job. It doesn't have to be a specific weapon type.

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Post by Zeferoth on April 25th 2013, 12:52 pm

Also, describe the shots they can take. 10 shots from a light, medium, or heavy weapon

1. What weapon section? I didn't see one in the gummi section.

2. It sounds like you wanted me to descripe how many hits it takes from each weapon to take out my sheilds.

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Post by Zihark on April 25th 2013, 1:05 pm

After reviewing the template, it was included, but not in the coding. Here is the correct coding.

Name:

Size:

Type:

Appearance:

Total Processing Units:

Speed:

Weapons:

Commander:

Crew:

Passengers:

Rearrange your template to look like this, with the weapon templates in spoilers, and we will continue with the approval.

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Post by Zeferoth on April 25th 2013, 1:15 pm

ok hows that

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Post by Zihark on April 25th 2013, 2:00 pm

Put the fire rate in terms of posts. 500 is much too large. The weight can be changed to a relative description like Light, Medium, Heavy, etc, which will help determine damage. 5000 ammo each is also a too much.

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Post by Zeferoth on April 25th 2013, 2:06 pm

Im going to need an example to know exactly how to put it.

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Post by Zihark on April 25th 2013, 2:15 pm

Check out the more recent Gummi Ships. Namely Kasturi's and Black Knight's ships.

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Post by Zeferoth on April 25th 2013, 2:29 pm

ok how about 20 shots per post with a total count to 500?, and the weight will be medium

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Post by Zihark on April 25th 2013, 3:01 pm

20 shots total per post. Edit that in.

The shield is underpowered, you can up the amount of shots used to destroy the shield, and what weapon weight would do it. The other weapon weights will be estimated from the description you use.


You can also raise the damage that the radar can sustain.

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Post by Zeferoth on April 25th 2013, 3:06 pm

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Post by Zihark on April 25th 2013, 3:12 pm

Which weapons can the special Gummis take hits from? Light, Medium, Heavy, Etc?

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Post by Zeferoth on April 25th 2013, 4:08 pm

does it need to be specificly for one type of attack or do you want me to give you the breaking point for all three?

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Post by Zihark on April 25th 2013, 5:02 pm

Any weapon could damage it, but describe it in terms of one weapon. Since there are more than just 3 weapons. The other weapons will be estimated during the RP.

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Post by Zeferoth on April 25th 2013, 5:30 pm

ok how about 50 hits from medium attacks?

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Post by Zihark on April 25th 2013, 5:36 pm

Edit that in

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Post by Zeferoth on April 25th 2013, 6:27 pm

edited

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Post by Zihark on April 25th 2013, 6:32 pm

How long does it take to shift the shield to a specific location?

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Post by Zeferoth on April 25th 2013, 6:39 pm

it will take a post to divert all the power to one location

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