Cloud Strife

Name: Cloud Strife

Age: 24 (According to Advent Children Age)

Gender: Male

Home World: Nimbelheim, August 19

Race/Species: Human

Appearance:Cloud is of medium height with a muscular build. His blond hair is spiked, and in Final Fantasy VII featured one particularly large spike emerging into the air. For this reason, Cloud's spiked hair has become one of the trademarks of his appearance, although in later appearances the spikes have been toned down. Cloud has blue eyes, which glow due to the Mako flowing through his body. Because "Mako eyes" are an icon of SOLDIER, Cloud is often mistaken as one. Cloud's weapon of choice is the iconic Buster Sword, a massive sword several feet long which Cloud wields in most of his appearances. Cloud's other trademark weapon is the set of Fusion Swords which he uses in Advent Children, which consists of six individual swords that connect together to form a larger sword similar in shape and size to the Buster Sword.
Cloud's outfit in Final Fantasy VII, is the standard uniform for 1st Class SOLDIERs. The clothing consists of simple pants with a sleeveless shirt, which are indigo in color, and a belt. Cloud also wears brown boots and gauntlets with a single pauldron over his left shoulder. This is the uniform he wears for most of his other appearances, with slight variations.

In Crisis Core, Cloud wears the uniform of a Shinra infantryman of blue clothing with several belts and straps and a green-grey piece of cloth around the collar. He also wears his helmet to hide his identity at times.
In Advent Children, Cloud's clothing design was made with fighting in mind, and the concept began with a black robe and was restructured into the final version seen in the film. Cloud's hair in particular was changed both to show the passage of time since the game, and to be more realistic. His clothing consists of a high collar black shirt with no sleeves, black pants and boots, and black cloth covering his left leg and arm; the cloth on his arm seems to mainly be to hide his Geostigma symptoms. Cloud also gains an entirely new pauldron, and his chest is covered by two straps, held in place by a badge representing Fenrir, the animal that has come to be associated with Cloud. Like the rest of the party, he also wears a pink ribbon around his left arm in remembrance of Aerith Gainsborough, though it is hidden for most of the movie due to his black cloth.

In Kingdom Hearts, Cloud's costume was designed to resemble Vincent Valentine's outfit. Cloud wears a tattered red cloak with dark blue pants and a shirt and brown boots. He wears gloves, the left of which has golden trimmings, almost like a claw. His costume also features many crossing belts. Cloud's most distinctive trait in this appearance is a demonic black wing protruding from his left shoulder, meant to symbolize both his connection to Sephiroth, and the dark powers he is using. This costume can also be obtained as DLC in Dissidia 012 Final Fantasy. In Kingdom Hearts II, Cloud appears identical to his appearance in Advent Children, save that his new sword is loosely bound as the Buster Sword was in Kingdom Hearts.

Alignment: (Wow, Choosing cloud on this is a hard one), Neutral and lawful, I would think

Elemental Mastery: Fire,Ice,Lightning, (According to starting magic)[/url])

Personality: Although he rarely admits it, Cloud is often quite withdrawn and introspective. He knows that there is a lot that he does not understand about himself, and this causes him to be irritable at times, and sometimes even to snap at friends. Toward the beginning of his work as an AVALANCHE mercenary, he also has a very large ego pertaining to his skills and his past with SOLDIER. He changes for the better once he realizes that there are bigger problems than himself to deal with.


Weapons: Buster Sword-

Fighting Style: Simply charging into the fight, No real plans are made

Only use whole numbers 1-10. (Make sure that all the points used in total add up to 45)
Attack: 3
Defense: 5
Magic Attack: 1
Magic Defense: 1
Speed: 10
Agility: 5
Accuracy: 5
Stamina:10
Luck:5[/i]

Affinities: :Sword (Cause he lugs that huge thing around alot)

Weaknesses: [i]He's completely mentally unstable, Sephiroth, Jenova Poisoning Augmenting his physical strength but lowering speed, accuracy, and agility

History: Final Fantasy VII

Final Fantasy VII begins with Cloud joining AVALANCHE in a series of raids against the Mako reactors that surround the city of Midgar. Although the first mission is a success, AVALANCHE is trapped at another reactor during a subsequent raid. The reactor explodes, which sends Cloud flying from the upper levels of Midgar into the slums below. He lands unharmed on a flower bed, where he is formally introduced to Aeris. Prompted by the arrival of operatives of the Shinra Company's Turks organization sent to capture Aeris, Cloud agrees to work for Aeris as her bodyguard.

After Cloud defends Aeris from her would-be kidnappers, Aeris offers to show him the way back to Sector 7. Along the way, she mentions that her first boyfriend had been a first Class SOLDIER, as Cloud claims to have been. They then meet up with Tifa Lockhart, and the three infiltrate the mansion of crime boss Don Corneo. From him, the party learns that Shinra has discovered the location of AVALANCHE's hideout and plans to collapse the upper level of Sector 7 onto the slums below. Despite AVALANCHE's efforts to prevent it, Shinra successfully destroys Sector 7, killing its population and three members of AVALANCHE. The Turks finally capture Aeris, who the player learns is the last living member of the "Cetra," a race closely attuned with the planet. President Shinra believes that Aeris can lead him to a mythical land of fertility known as the "Promised Land", which he expects to be ripe with easily harvested Mako energy.

The remaining members of AVALANCHE—Cloud, Tifa, and Barret—infiltrate Shinra's headquarters to rescue Aeris. After freeing her and Red XIII, who joins the party, they escape when most of the personnel in the building—including President Shinra—are killed. Finding the body of the president skewered by a long sword, Cloud suspects a man called Sephiroth has returned from his presumed death. These suspicions are confirmed by an executive spared during the massacre, who claims to have witnessed Sephiroth murder the president and state that he would never allow Shinra to claim the Promised Land. The party also learns that during Sephiroth's attack on Shinra, the headless body of a creature named "Jenova" disappeared from the building's research facility.

While Rufus Shinra, the president's son, assumes control of the Shinra Company, AVALANCHE pursues Sephiroth across the planet, fearing his intentions for the Promised Land may be more destructive than Shinra's. During this pursuit, the party is joined by Yuffie, Cait Sith, Vincent and Cid. As the journey progresses, each member of the group must come to terms with personal conflicts from their past, and the full scope of Sephiroth's plan is eventually revealed to the player: if the planet is significantly damaged, the Lifestream within will gather at the point of injury, attempting to heal the wound. Sephiroth explains that he intends to use a powerful spell known as "Meteor" to fatally injure the planet, inciting a reaction in the Lifestream to heal the wound before it can cause the planet's destruction. Entering the fissure created by the meteor's impact, Sephiroth would merge with all the energy of the planet, granting him god-like power over it. At an ancient temple erected by the Cetra, AVALANCHE attempts to undermine Sephiroth's plot by claiming the Black Materia needed to activate Meteor, but Sephiroth displays a mysterious power over Cloud, forcing him to relinquish it.


Sephiroth kills Aeris in a scene referred to as "the most shocking moment in video games". Fearing that Sephiroth may cast Meteor, Aeris sets off to stop him on her own. Concerned for her safety, AVALANCHE follows her to the northern continent, where the player enters an ancient Cetra city. After finding Aeris praying to the planet for aid, Sephiroth, unseen, begins affecting Cloud's behavior once again, and attempts to force him to kill her. Cloud resists Sephiroth's command, but Sephiroth himself appears and kills Aeris. After laying her body to rest, the surviving characters resolve to defeat Sephiroth and avenge her.

Later, Sephiroth begins causing Cloud to doubt his memories and insists that he is not a real human, but rather a specimen created from Jenova's genetic material by Professor Hojo. Jenova, the player learns, was an interstellar creature who crashlanded on the planet approximately two thousand years earlier, arriving via travel on a meteor. This collision formed a large impact crater, grievously harming the planet. Jenova soon emerged from the crater, intending to infect all living organisms on the planet with a virus that would induce insanity and incite monstrous transformations. Among its victims were most of the Cetra, who were approached when Jenova used its mimic abilities to appear as their relatives. Attempting to defend itself, the planet created giant monsters called "WEAPONs", while the majority of humans fled rather than fight Jenova. However, a small group of Cetra survivors fought to defend the planet and managed to defeat Jenova, confining it within the fissure created by its landing. Afterward, the WEAPONs entered hibernation to await any future threat that could harm the planet. Eventually, the mummified remains of Jenova would be unearthed by Professor Gast, a researcher for the Shinra Company. Mistaking the creature for a Cetra, Gast was given authorization to conduct an experiment to artificially produce a Cetra by combining cells from Jenova with the fetus of an unborn child.

Five years before the present-day events, in a cutscene seen by the player, Sephiroth learned that he was the product of this experiment while on a Shinra mission in Nibelheim, the hometown of Cloud and Tifa. However, unaware of all details involved, he concluded that he was a Cetra who had been produced solely from Jenova's genetic material. Enraged, he burned down the town, intending to kill all descendants of those he believed had abandoned his ancestors in the defense of the planet. According to Cloud, he confronted Sephiroth during this massacre, after which Sephiroth vanished under unknown circumstances and was presumed dead until his reappearance in the Shinra building. When AVALANCHE reaches the Northern Crater, Sephiroth tells Cloud that he was not in Nibelheim, showing him images of a 1st Class SOLDIER with dark hair who occupies Cloud's place in his memories. With Tifa unable to refute Sephiroth's claims, Cloud goes crazy and, thinking it the right thing to do, gives the black materia to Sephiroth's real body, which is encased in crystalized Mako, which results in the WEAPONs' awakening. During the earthquake that follows, Cloud is separated from his companions and falls into the Lifestream.

As the meteor summoned by Sephiroth slowly approaches the planet, the Shinra Company focuses its efforts on protecting humanity from the WEAPONs, who have begun to perceive everything as a threat to the planet. The members of AVALANCHE are interrogated, and eventually nearly executed. They escape from Junon, and obtain Cid's airship Highwind. They then search for Cloud. They discover Shinra's plan to take Huge Materia from the major spots of the world. Barret Wallace saves his hometown from Shinra's escort, thus redeeming himself for building the Mako reactor there in the first place. They eventually find Cloud, locating him on a tropical resort island called Mideel where he washed up following the casting of Meteor; he is in a catatonic state. Unable to see Cloud like this, Tifa resolves that she will not leave Mideel until Cloud has fully recovered. The WEAPONs' destructive activity quickly causes the island to split open, depositing Cloud and Tifa into the Lifestream below. There, she reconstructs Cloud's memories and learns the truth about his past. Although the player learns that he is a real human being and had actually been in Nibelheim during Sephiroth's attack, he never actually succeeded in joining SOLDIER and only managed to attain the rank of private in Shinra's military. The player learns that the previously-seen dark-haired SOLDIER is named "Zack", and was Aeris' first boyfriend. During Sephiroth's destruction of Nibelheim, Zack, Tifa and Cloud fought Sephiroth in Nibelheim's Mako reactor. Although Tifa and Zack were defeated, Cloud and Sephiroth severely wounded one another. After decapitating the body of Jenova, which had been stored in the Mako reactor, Sephiroth is thrown into the Lifestream by Cloud, taking the creature's head with him. Rather than dying, however, his body and consciousness were crystalized in Mako inside Jenova's crater.

While Tifa was taken to safety in Midgar, Cloud and Zack were among the wounded survivors who were apprehended by Shinra as part an elaborate cover-up of Sephiroth's massacre. Professor Hojo subjected these survivors to an experiment, in which he performed the same enhancements given to members of SOLDIER. However, because Hojo conducted the experiment without any concern for the subjects' mental capacities to handle the procedure, all but Zack entered a comatose state. Nearly five years later, Zack broke free from his confinement and took Cloud with him. The player learns that the procedure used to enhance members of SOLDIER involved both Mako showers and the injection of cells from Jenova. The alien cells inhabiting Cloud's body allowed his mind to construct a false persona, built around Zack's behavior, fighting style, and description of Sephiroth's destruction in Nibelheim, but they also allowed Sephiroth to modulate his behavior. The cells' inherent ability to duplicate information led Cloud to believe that he had been the 1st Class SOLDIER in Nibelheim, as Zack was shot and killed outside Midgar by pursuing Shinra soldiers, shortly before the beginning of the game. Afterward, Tifa discovered Cloud, who was wearing Zack's spare uniform, and offered him a job with AVALANCHE.

With the truth revealed, Cloud awakens and rejoins AVALANCHE. Before he awakened, the few members of AVALANCHE recovered powerful magic, known as Huge Materia, to counter Shinra's attempts to destroy the WEAPONs and Meteor. During the next few segments, many members achieve their lifelong dreams, or settle their past. Among these are that Cid Highwind became the first man in outer space, Yuffie Kisagari encourages her father to return her hometown Wutai to its former glory, and Vincent Valentine learns the truth about his past. The player also learns that, in her final moments, Aeris was casting a spell known as "Holy", the only means of opposing Meteor. Though she succeeds, Sephiroth's focused will prevents the spell from taking effect and has been restraining it since. Deciding that humanity must be protected from the WEAPONs before Sephiroth can be approached, Shinra and AVALANCHE destroy the WEAPONs, but nearly all of Shinra's executives are killed in the process, seemingly including Rufus. Among the few survivors are Reeve Tuesti, revealed to be the repentant controller of Cait Sith, and Professor Hojo, who is revealed to be Sephiroth's biological father. He explains that he and his wife were assistants to Professor Gast, and offered up their unborn child as a test subject to research involving Jenova. When Hojo attempts to help Sephiroth to gain mastery over the Lifestream afterward, AVALANCHE is given no choice but to fight and kill him. Cloud tells the remaining members of his team to go find what they are fighting for. Every member returns, including Cait Sith, who had been captured by Shinra Inc. for helping Cloud.

Red XIII's grandfather dies, and tells him to go with Cloud to the final battle. With each member of Cloud's group at peace with his or her past and all other opponents defeated, the group travels through the mantle of the planet to its core, where they defeat Sephiroth and free Holy. However, due to Meteor's already close proximity to the planet's surface, Holy is unable to destroy it alone. Selected as Meteor's target, Midgar is almost completely destroyed by the storms that spawn from its presence. However, sent by Aeris' spirit, the Lifestream itself rises from the planet to aid Holy by pushing Meteor away, allowing Holy to destroy it. During the epilogue that follows, Red XIII looks down on the ruins of Midgar, shown five hundred years later. While the landscape had once been desolate due to Shinra's operations, it is now a land of lush greenery. The player does not know what happened to the rest of the team.

Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children

Two years after the events of Final Fantasy VII, the Planet is recovering from the devastating attack by Meteor, while the survivors of Midgar have begun to build a new city, aptly named "Edge", on the outskirts of the old metropolis. However, a strange disease known as "geostigma" has arisen. After his showdown with Sephiroth, Cloud Strife established the "Strife Delivery Service", with the aid of Tifa Lockhart, whom he has been living with in Edge. Marlene Wallace and an orphaned boy named Denzel have been entrusted to their care.

After receiving a message from Tifa, Cloud is attacked by three mysterious men who believe that he knows the location of their missing "mother". However, the battle is cut short and he escapes. Hoping to gain information on the mysterious attackers, Cloud visits Rufus Shinra, the leader of the seemingly defunct Shinra Company. Rufus attempts to enlist Cloud's help to stop the trio, but fails. After their meeting, Kadaj, leader of the men who attacked Cloud, breaks into Rufus' lodge and demands that Rufus tell him where to find his "mother". It is revealed by Kadaj that "mother" is the remains of Jenova, and is somehow connected to the cause of the geostigma. Kadaj also announces that he and his "brothers", Yazoo and Loz, are planning a new "reunion" that will culminate in an assault on the Planet itself.


Tifa fighting Loz in Aerith's churchLoz arrives at Aerith Gainsborough's church in an attempt to find their "mother", and is confronted by Tifa. A short battle ensues with Tifa holding the upper hand, burying Loz in a rubble. Loz's consciousness is however quickly regained and he resumes the fight. After distracting Tifa, he uses his lightning-speed powers and hits her. She is hit once more by Loz, but Marlene distracts Loz by throwing materia from Cloud's storage chest. Loz closes in on Marlene and Tifa tells her to run just before the scene changes.

Kadaj and his "brothers" begin collecting children infected with geostigma, including Denzel and the uninfected Marlene, and take them to the Forgotten City. Cloud attempts to rescue them but fails and must be rescued himself by Vincent Valentine. Vincent reveals to Cloud what the trio are seeking and that it could result in the return of Sephiroth. He also tells him that geostigma is the result of one's body working excessively to fight off an infection brought on by Jenova's lingering presence within the Lifestream. Cloud agrees to return to Edge and face Kadaj in direct battle.

In Edge, the villainous trio call forth several monsters to attack the populace, including the dragon summon "Bahamut SIN". While the other party members of Final Fantasy VII deal with Bahamut SIN, Reno and Rude attempt to take care of Yazoo and Loz until Cloud arrives. Through their teamwork, Cloud and his friends soon dispatch the monsters and Bahamut SIN. In a nearby building, Rufus reveals to Kadaj that he has been in possession of the remains of Jenova all along, tossing the box containing it from the edge of the building. Kadaj dives after the box and recovers it, although Rufus manages to damage the box, spilling some of the contents inside. Kadaj spots Cloud in hot pursuit of him, and a motorcycle chase carries them into the ruins of Midgar.

Cloud catches up to Kadaj and they slide off of the end of the unfinished highway. They then go into Aerith's church where they confront each other. Cloud comes off worse for it until a magical blast from Kadaj destroys the flowerbed and releases an outflow of seemingly Lifestream-infused water which cures Cloud's geostigma and proves to be harmful to Kadaj. Cloud pursues Kadaj, who has fled to the ruins of Shinra Headquarters in the center of Midgar. The two fight and as Cloud has Kadaj in the brink of defeat, Kadaj distracts Cloud with the box containing Jenova's remains, which Kadaj then jumps after and absorbs into his body. Cloud attempts to land a deathblow to Kadaj but is stopped and parried in midair when Kadaj transforms into Sephiroth at a blink of an eye. He reveals that once those who die from the geostigma return to the Lifestream, he will be able to control it and use the Planet as a vessel to travel space in search of a new planet.


A battle between Cloud and Sephiroth follows across Midgar. Cloud eventually gains strength and confidence from thinking of everything he holds dear which Sephiroth would destroy. The battle ends with Cloud defeating Sephiroth with an updated version of his Omnislash Limit Break. Sephiroth dissipates, leaving a severely weakened Kadaj at Cloud's mercy. Aerith's spirit begins to pour healing rain across Edge, curing everyone of their geostigma. Aerith tells Kadaj to be at rest, who believes Aerith's voice to be that of his "mother", and he is taken by the Lifestream. After that, Cloud is shot by surprise by Yazoo. He and Loz are now slowly succumbing to the healing rain as well. They both have an arm full of materia, and they prepare one final blast at Cloud, resulting in a large explosion that disintegrates them and engulfs Cloud. Cloud appears surrounded by a white light, and Aerith and Zack are heard. Zack tells Cloud that his place is not with them yet, and sends him back to Aerith's church through the Lifestream.

Cloud awakens in Aerith's old church with wounds healed, now surrounded by his friends and the citizens of Edge. He then demonstrates the healing powers of the water pooled in the church by curing the children afflicted with the geostigma. Cloud looks in the direction of his friends, and his first smile is triggered as he looks at his friends. He then suddenly stops when he sees Aerith crouching by some other children. As she stands and walks to the doorway, she turns back to assure Cloud that he's all right, and then steps into a white light with Zack. Finally at peace, Cloud agrees, and knows that he's no longer alone.,(Typed up my own view of the 2 FFVII games i know, so that it shows other people hes been with, SPOILERS to the story of cloud strife)

APPLYING FOR A CANON?Not always the opponent will be two meters wide, so Doton, Kanraku Ana won't always be able to stuck their opponent in ground. So Mitsu had decided to upgrade hes Doton, Kanraku Ana, with use of Shadow Clones. The more Shadow Clones together will cast this jutsu, the bigger will be the sinking hole. By every clone, the diameter of sinking hole, will increase by two meters in diameter.
It was early morning, bit dark and clear sky, with no sun to be seen. A regular morning at Village hidden among the Stones. Mitsu woke up from the birds, that were singing at he's windows. Very tired, Mitsu standed up, and took a pack of noodles, boiling them and eating them for breakfest, Mitsu exited hes house, and was about to go to the food stand, to get some Rice Balls, to eat in middle of training. At the way there, he yawned alot, and every time putting hand infront of mouth. When he arrived at the Food Stand, Mitsu was still not fully woken up, and still tired. He didn't say anything much, only what he wishes to order, and that's it. Buying five Rice Balls, Mitsu exited the food stand, and continued going to the Training Spot, that was located at middle of Forest, near Village Hidden among the Stones. Going out of the gates of Village Hidden among the stones, Mitsu doesn't pay much attention to surrouding, guards and that he actually just left Village Hidden among the Stones.
Was not long, and Mitsu had arrived at the Forest, and few minutes later, he was at Training Spot and Finally fully waken up.
"Alright! Time to start some training!" cheerful said Mitsu running hes hand past mouth and giving a evil smile. Energy and Chakra was flowing within him, as he crossed fingers shouting: "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" as he created ten shadow clones, that were ready to fight. The Wind was blowing past the Training spot, the leaves shaking from wind and sand was blowing along the wind. Mitsu and the Shadow Clones grouped in two groups, one group having five Shadow Clones, but other group having four Shadow Clones and one Original Mitsu.
"Alright then! Time to upgrade our jutsu to whole new level!" Mitsu shouted slaming hands on ground and breaking hole in center of the group, as the Shadow Clones and other group did the same slaming hands on ground and shouting: "Doton, Ookii Daishou Kanraku Ana!!!" as the hole was crashed and it was made pure Doton, Kanraku Ana, with only 2 meters in diameter. "Not big enough! It must be 10 meters!" shouted Mitsu, repeating to slam hes hands on ground and shouting: "Doton, Ooki Daishou Kanraku Ana!!!" with all shadow clones doing the same. The result was same with only 2 meters in diameter.
"D.. amn!" said some Shadow Clones, continuing to train as the chakra was flowing all around them. "I... I must learn this Jutsu!" Mitsu said slaming hands on ground, creating a sinking hole and shouting: "Doton, Ooki Daishou Kanraku Ana!" creating only 2 meters in diameter. He continued to do this with Shadow CLones for hours, as they were rashed, and sweating from training, almost chakra-less they continued to train, without a break. They all were breathing fast, tired from training, but they did not quit and continued to try and try master this jutsu. Mitsu was forcing himself to the limit, and more he tried, the more closer he was to fainting. "I once was really trying and forcing myself to the limit, to learn first version of this jutsu! But then i was still very weak, if i could learn a S ranked jutsu Flying Thunder God Tech, then i must learn this jutsu!" Mitsu shouted continuing to train with hes Shadow Clones.
Mitsu was sweating, very tired and almost out of Chakra. All hes body sides started to suddenly hurt as he tried to move them, all the Shadow Clone grabbed their right hand with left one, falling on ground and dispelling one by one. During this, Mitsu suffered more pain, though collected knowledge, he felt that big experience was collected during this training.
He standed up with pain, leaning against the closest tree, reaching for bag where he putted hes food. Putting hand in it, he took out Riceball with Right hand, while still holding it with left hand. Slowly eating all of the Rice balls, he just sat there looking at floor. Hes chakra amount was almost spent, he had no energy to actually stand back up, he was feeling pain on every side of body, he was rashed up and sweating. This time, he really did overdo it, even though it was just a A ranked jutsu.
Without noticing, Mitsu's eyelids felt so heavy, as they slowly were closed, falling asleep. Even though it just started evening, Mitsu woke up late morning. He looked around, thinking: "Damn! Must continue training!" he said standing back up, running hand past forehead and crossing fingers he shouted: "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" creating four clones. All of them standed in circle, making big distance between feet. All of them had a evil look, slamming both hands on ground shouting: "Doton, Ooki Daishou Kanraku Ana!" that cracked earth 10 meters in diameter, but the explosion was big enough that All Mitsu shadow clones and Mitsu himself fell back. Two Shadow Clones were dispelled from hard landing. "S.. hyt!" said Mitsu standing back up and recreating Shadow Clones. He was already rashed, but chakra was flowing all around him and hes clones. From rage they all slammed hand on ground, cracking the spots where they slammed, but cracking a hole with ten meters in diameter, again they all fell back, but only one clone was dispelled. "Shyt! Why this keeps happening?" said one of the Shadow Clones standing up. "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" said Mitsu recreating Shadow Clone. Everyone ran into circle, and they all were breathing fast already, though chakra was still flowing around them, slowly it became white, releasing White Roaring Chakra: "Doton, Ooki Daishou Kanraku Ana!" all of Shadow Clones and Mitsu slammed their hands on ground, so hard, that earth under the palms were cracked very deep. Suddenly a hole, with ten meters in diameter was created. The jutsu Doton, Ooki Daishou Kanraku Ana was successfully mastered. Mitsu fell on ground breathing slowly, but deeper, with unchanged mood.

The sun was shining over the horizon as the time was passing
through the few mountains that were around the village hidden in the clouds.
The area was surrounded by clouds and the ninja here was known for there
lightning jutsu it was always a story behind a village existence. As the sun
was at the horizon there was a soft wind at first as it picked up it was the
vibrations of the battle within the village of lightning. It was interesting if
you could say the least. The village was either going to fall or be broken into
pieces and will cost a lot to fix back to its glory but a lot of things were at
the brick of its existence this world for example but you know how it is
putting stuff forward to making your dreams a reality. As the sound of
footsteps could be heard it was the sound of heels making there way from the
outskirts of the village. This person was a bit small but had long legs to match
her sizes which made this person seem taller then she actually was. This women
was normal girl height not a midget or anything. She wore a black cloak which
hid her hands and cover her body perfectly she was now beyond your average
girl.You wouldn’t believe a girl like her was able to take down the seven tails
with brute power with a little help of course.

As the heels stopped at the entrance of the village well she
stopped on a hill her eyes, looked through the mask as she smirked. She watch
as the smoked rose from the village she couldn’t believe they actually did it
they attack one of the great nations. She crossed her arms as she had new power
at her hands and was anxious to try them out here and now so what would happen
here will be unknown till it happened isn’t that right. She would remain with
her arm crossed still no where in the village just enjoying the scent of the
blood and destruction she was getting from the village. She closed her eyes as
she started to sense the chakra that was within the village she was loving this
completely there were three of her sins within the village. This was pride
chance to take over the village since she had her turn. She would turn her head
to where the smoke was coming from. She would bend her knees as she would
pounce on what was left of the crumbling
gates. She saw bodies all around the village Wrath was laughing her ass off
within Claire cause she saw what Claire see’s.”That Envy is here Claire he seem
to be in bit of a bind what will you do”asked Wrath. Claire eyes lock on the
two chakra signatures she picked up which was not of her group she would wait a
minute. She would jump from the gate landing in a puddle of blood with a smile on
her face.

As she started to stand up straight her eyes looked forward
as the sound of chaos was being heard she loved it. She knew she could count on
her man to take the job with power like they had. She began to walk forward as
her body begun to move step by step closer to the battle point. Unknown to
anyone she had the seven tails with her but in a scroll she had to summon so
its chakra couldn’t be sensed at all which was perfect in this case for sure.
She would step a few feet in the village as her eyes would look up to see Kira leaving
the battle front for time being she wondered why. She shrugged her shoulders as
she begun to pace forward to the opening of destroyed buildings as she watch
Pride was fighting a person who must be the raikage. Still fifty feet from the
battle she was loving the sound and smell of death in the air it turned her on
which was weird. She would open her eyes as she look at the people before her
she loved this she would smile under the mask. She would make the tiger seal as
she would have a eye on the man who wason the roof who was trying to go after
Envy and the guy fighting pride. The Gas molecules in the area would begin to
combine at a quick pace as there would be a sudden mist in the air this mist
would take the vision from the two shinobi. Her man could see perfectly within
the mist it was just the two who she targeted perfectly. She would watch her
art as the mist filled the area she loved it this was her new jutsu known as
Hell Release it was even stronger then you thought it would be. After the mist
would be in the area as she would slowly allow her body to breakdown to the
tiny bit of gas molecules. As her body would disappear within thin air. She
would be in front of envy as her left hand materialize as she would hold her
blade Diamond edge to the throat of the dude trying to speak to envy. Her body
still in its gasly form accept her hand which was hold the blade. The man would
still be in her genjutsu unless he could break free he would be stuck and have
no idea what was happening in reality.

Claire turned her gasly head toward envy who would be behind
her he could she her since she seem to be transparent. Accept her hand she
would smile as she would take a breath as she would speak.”Hmm should you have
done this,Envy after this we are going to have a long talk”Said Claire as she
turn her head back to the victim at hand. She looked at the sword that was only
at her gasly side she smiled so he was a holder of the other Kusunagi how
interesting this will be. She still was in her cloak and mask her realidentity
was still a mystery to these two…(From my other sites, In order, Naruto-Bleach)

Pictures:

Unfortunately, this is not acceptable as it is, especially for such a significant character.

What ways could i improve,

The thing is, that this is so terribly unacceptable, that I really don't feel comfortable giving you another shot at a canon character. My suggestion is that you simply go for a custom.

K