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Army Of Flies

Post by Xen The Second on April 8th 2011, 8:57 pm

Name: Army Of Flies

Requirements: Sand Must be Present

Magic Cost: 50

Quantity: 80

Class: Offense, Defense

Duration: 10 posts

Element: Earth, Wind

Description: The insects summoned look like brown-orange fruit flies and rise from the sand when Xen desires them to do so. They make a constant buzzing sound, and have the stamina of average flies, but they are more intellegent.

Capabilities: Average attacks and dodges plus the following plus they can strategize, burrow underground, and scout a 1/2 mile vicinity.



History: Xen noticed how most of the time he was outnumbered, and developed this attack, with his mastery of earth by forming the flies with sand. He then worked on special attacks and strategies for his "Army Of Flies"

(Sorry about the first post, I was in a hurry, and after copying the template, clicked Post Reply instead of New Topic.)



Last edited by Xen The Second on April 14th 2011, 3:34 pm; edited 3 times in total

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Re: Army Of Flies

Post by The Cloaked One on April 9th 2011, 10:07 pm

Firstly, all the abilities they have are kind of misplaced. Nowhere on the summon template does it say they can be given their own spells for extra costs beyond what the summon originally costs. Two of them shouldn't even be included, one of them shouldn't cost magic, and the other two hardly make sense. How are eighty bugs supposed to form a shield the size of a human-sized entity? That'd barely be enough to cover your foot, let alone your whole body. Keeping that in mind, how are they supposed to form a spear, let alone a spear sharp enough that it would be able to stab and pierce through flesh? Eighty bugs would hardly make a decent arrow, and they certainly wouldn't be able to tear through it as if they were steel.

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Re: Army Of Flies

Post by Xen The Second on April 10th 2011, 9:42 pm

Try that. I took out all the extra abilities that costed mp, and I was wondering if they would be able to wrap around people, like rope.

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Re: Army Of Flies

Post by The Cloaked One on April 10th 2011, 10:44 pm

If by "rope" you mean eighty bugs worth of rope, which would barely be more than a foot long that would have the tension to hold a rock no bigger than your palm, sure.

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Re: Army Of Flies

Post by Xen The Second on April 11th 2011, 6:52 am

Okay. . . no rope. Besides that, is my summon okay now?

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Re: Army Of Flies

Post by The Cloaked One on April 11th 2011, 12:14 pm

Well, other than your overuse of the word "plus" in it's capabilities, it seems fine. But be aware, they're going to be the size of real fruit flies. One swing of a sword through the swarm may kill several dozens. The bugs would have to all fly directly up someones nose and down their throat to suffocate them to have any legitimate battle functions, and even that could be solved by.. not opening your mouth as you run through a cloud of insects. Or coughing.

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Re: Army Of Flies

Post by Xen The Second on April 13th 2011, 4:03 pm

Okay. Would It be okay if I bump it up to 100?

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Re: Army Of Flies

Post by The Cloaked One on April 14th 2011, 3:28 pm

If you bump the cost to 50, sure.

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Re: Army Of Flies

Post by Xen The Second on April 14th 2011, 3:34 pm

Deal. Edited.

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Re: Army Of Flies

Post by The Cloaked One on April 14th 2011, 8:55 pm

Approved.

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