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Abel Nightroad

Post by Abel on September 16th 2010, 10:22 pm

Name: Abel Nightroad

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Home World: Hollow Bastion

Race/Species: Human

Appearance: Abel is taller then the average man, but not by much. It is just noticeable, but typically does not have a commanding air about him. He is fairly skinny, but not sickly or noticeably so. He is just not big. His skin is paler then most, and that is because of his peculiar state of being (see history). His fingers are long and slender as well. His eyes are a piercing gray color, which is his most notable feature. He typically has a happy face on him and can be quite boisterous. His voice is slightly higher pitched then most male's, but it is not shrill. His hair is pearly white and falls down to his middle back and is always pulled back into a pony tail. He has long bangs that go into two different arcs over his face down to about to the top of his nose on either side of his eyes.

His dress is not casual, but he prefers it that way. He wears mostly black clothing with some variations. The pants and cloak he wears are both billowing, meaning they are loose fitting, but are not falling off of his body at all. They are laced with gold material in random places giving it a noble look. His gloves are white and he hardly takes them off. The cloak is a button up. His shoes are black dress shoes redesigned for comfort. He also wears glasses. They are not thick and he can see with out them. They only provide a small correction to his sight.

Alignment: Lawful Good

Elemental Mastery:
Primary Lightning
Secondary Darkness
Teitary Water


Personality: Abel's personality is of two completely different sets. There is the one where he is not fighting, and the one where he is. The one that is day to day and his typical one is quite happy go lucky. He likes to crack silly jokes and is quite empathetic with other people. He is soft warm and caring. He is almost like a moving, breathing, life sized teddy bear. If anyone needs a shoulder to lean on he is sure the one to provide it. He knows nothing but caring for others well being and will gladly make any sacrifice to protect the ones he cares about. He is a very strong lover in many aspects, and this raw emotion is what leads to his other side.

In battle, Abel is like a completely different person, though retaining his compassion for those he cares about, this is turned to hate. This hate is directed and anyone who has or is trying to hurt the ones he cares for. He shows no mercy what so ever to these enemies and will do his very best to tear them apart. He does not know how to hold back aside from the limitations his body sets for himself. He still keeps his mind though and is very smart and tactical in how he goes about it. His anger and hatred are clear though, etched into every line of his face. He very rarely will fight with out the intent to kill.

Weapon: Blood Scythe

Fighting Style: To sum it up plainly, all out. ALL OUT. Abel, when in his transformed, fighting state, is purely chaotic and with out any holding back aside from the limitations of his own body and the stage he is in. He attacks fast and fierce and from all sides. He does not let up. He does plan quite well as well. He just lets it all come to fruit at one point, and this is because he does not tire easily nor does he fear getting damaged because he does not need to.

Affinities: Abel's strength is his attack strength in all aspects and also his intelligence. Also his courage and dedication. It is hard to steer him away from anything he is aimed towards in the metaphorical sense. His timing is near flawless, making him very fierce to be up against. Also his stamina. It is off the charts, he can go on for a long time, and it is difficult to land the killing blow.

Weaknesses: The main weakness he has is his defense. He is fairly easy to injure.

Stats:

Attack/Strength Power: 8

Defense: 3

Magic/Mana Power: 6

Magic/Mana Defense: 3

Speed: 7

Accuracy: 3

Evasion/Agility: 3

Luck/Chance: 3

Stamina/Vitality: 10

History:

Abel was born to a religious family. A mother and a father, your typical happy home in Hollow Bastion. He was quite the average child as well. There wasnt much event in his earliest days either. They were wealthy and he received private schooling and was well fed, more or less the works. He was very happy, and could not complain about anything. His upbringing was quite ideal to most, and he was not one to take things for granted. He got his kind heart from his mother and his dedication of soul from his father. They said that these two traits mixed together made him the ideal baby boy. And so he grew up being praised as a great child with nothing but love. He rarely acted up and typically did what he was told. It was the perfect world.

People on the outside of this perfect world, didnt take much liking too it however. They would ask themselves, why cant that be me. Why wasnt I born into that life style. They typical fruits of jealousy and all that. Day by day the success of the family bred more hatred amongst those who had been harder on their luck and who life had not treated so kindly. It was not as if the Nightroad's were exactly snobs, but people are greedy, and the downtrodden could not accept there lot in life. It was a situation and mentality of "if i cant have it, why do you deserve to." Though no one took into account that Mr. Nightroad had in fact come from poverty as a boy and rightfully earned everything he had during those days. A band of the poor who could be considered evil rose up, part of a cult that believed themselves to be vampires. They attacked the family in their sleep one night, but could not find the boy. They searched endlessly, and after deducing there was no way he could have escaped, burnt down the house with the bodies of the parents still inside.

At the time Abel was 13 and full of intelligence. There was a way out that was not known or very obvious and one would not find it if one did not know where to look. Abel had used it to escape as ordered by his father. He was no warrior by any means, and he knew there was nothing he could do, for now.

After a short few days of grieving, Abel began to search for the ones who had done this too him, and in his seach happened upon the field of science. There were many freelancers in those days, willing to pay a high price to anyone willing to go through very new and controversial experiments. There was one such test being conducted that Abel found very appealing given the recent tragedy in his life. He applied for it immediately. The goal was to turn his body into a housing for nanobots. These little creatures in exchange for the energy they could obtain by the food the host consumed would grant him strength speed and make him harder to kill. It would open up his sense and turn him into a true warrior, and even unlock the ability to use magics like the more well known warriors of the Bastion. He went under the treatment, and against all odds, came out with success, his determination prevailing.

He did not even bother to take it for a test run. It was easy for him to track down the culprits and when he found them, they would know hell. It was in one of the less light parts of town, one that he had not been permitted to enter when his parents were alive. Now with out their guidance, there was no one to govern him, and his revenge for the wrong done to those who did not deserve it would be whole.. He destroyed them all beyond the point of reason, and he realized later that the nanobots not only granted him power, but also amplified his emotions. They themselves had a basic intelligence, which was only to destroy. He confronted the scientist on the matter who simply laughed and told him that was the over all goal. To turn Abel into a weapon of destruction. Abel refused to kill him so he could prove the man wrong and rub it in his face, but he was assured, the more he used the bots, the harder they would be to control, and more likely they would take over his consciousness. He left in disgust.

He started his life over with a new home and everything. He has since been living on his own, doing his best to help the Bastion in anyway that he could. He is proud of his home and does his best to rid it of filth. He had not had to use the nanobots often, but has shown to have the intellect to know how to use them like second nature. He knows of the existence of other worlds and wants to extend his patrol past the walls of the bastion to all of those as well to exterminate all evils from every corner of existence.

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Re: Abel Nightroad

Post by Kairi on September 16th 2010, 10:42 pm

Hiya, way to make a good application! I love it when people actually read shit, and do it properly. We just have a few things to fix and then we're all good!

Take out the weapons app from your character one. its not needed, but once your character is approved, you can slot it in a different app for the weapon itself.

Everything else is fairly fantastic, so not a lot of flaws I can find. Congrats on a superb app.

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Re: Abel Nightroad

Post by Abel on September 16th 2010, 10:47 pm

Okiday, it didnt really specify that I remember, so i just thought itd be easier to add it here but no worries there it is removed. And thank you for the kind words though this is lazy work for me. Only took me about an hour total to get it done. ^^.

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Re: Abel Nightroad

Post by Kairi on September 16th 2010, 10:53 pm

Aaaaaand now that i'm looking into it, we have a slight problem, requiring me to ask a question before fully bestowing my administrators pride on you.

How much of this is from Trinity Blood from the character sharing the same name and appearance?

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Post by Abel on September 16th 2010, 10:58 pm

The concept is more or less completely based off Abel Nightroad from Trinity Blood. However, all the creation is custom. The personality mirrors the one from that series, but i wrote it all up on my own. I did not use any reference and just took it from my brain. There is no plagiarism. The history is nothing like Abel's that I am aware of, (Im only on eps 10 so i can be sure on that but any cohesion was completely unintentional.) It is based off Abel Nightroad from Trinity Blood, but all the info was litterally just pulled from my head. I sat down and I typed what came to mind. It will not in anyway conflict with the KH verse as it will be completely adapted to tailor and fit the boundaries of this universe. A skill that I am quite good with I must say.

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Re: Abel Nightroad

Post by Kairi on September 16th 2010, 11:10 pm

Wonderful. I've been looking into it, and you're more or less okay. I'm glad you only used it as a base, considering, we wrote into the rules that youre not allowed to have another anime universe character on the site.

I'm gonna say you're okay, but if someone knows better than me, may they speak now, and get you in trouble?

As far as I'm concerned, you're approved. If another staff member wants to butt heads, you have to listen to them, okay?

We're good for now. Approved. Have fun with your weapons app, and enjoy the site.

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Re: Abel Nightroad

Post by Abel on September 16th 2010, 11:12 pm

Thank you very much Razz. I would hate to have this character go to waste. I may not have put all my effort into him, but he is still one of my characters and I grow very attached to things I create. Ill get right on to developing him ASAP.

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