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Post by Damien on July 29th 2010, 1:47 am

Well people! i need your help with this.. I'm applying for a scholarship and thus i have to write an essay entitled

In what way does "Start Ahead & Stay Ahead" help you in achieving your goals?

So guys mind giving me some ideas? I got a few but i would like to have more.. ^-^ And i need it ASAP! it's URGENT!

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Post by MorpheusZero on July 29th 2010, 3:31 am

Damn That one sucks--Sorry I got nothing. All I did for my scholarship was play a few songs on my guitar and tell them I can run a sound system...lol. Instant Free College.

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Post by Leo on July 29th 2010, 8:36 am

Starting Ahead can better prepare you for the day that your trials shall begin. Throw in the story of the Grasshopper and the diligiant ant. Hard work does indeed pay off, yet too often people remain lazy and don't care to apply themselves in order to achieve what they are truly capable of.

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Post by Tinkerbrat on July 29th 2010, 9:25 am

I would suggest that anything you write stand out beyond the norm. Those who read these base their judgement not only for the intellectual and quality of the essay, but also strive for something unique!

Remember, they read countless essays that pretty much babble along the same lines.

What Leo suggests is the key point to the subject, but everyone knows the grasshopper and the ant version. Use one that may be unexpected to catch their attention.

Worked for Lady GaGa and Nascar drivers >.>

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[11:24:41] Tinkerbrat : Leo... your character have a tail too?
[11:25:07] Leo : Yes , I'm half wolf.
[11:25:18] Leo : Wolf ears, fangs, and even a cute bushy tail lol.
[11:25:22] Leo : True doggy style.
[11:25:40] Tinkerbrat : O.O
[11:26:08] Tinkerbrat : fairies like ears >>
[11:26:21] Leo : they like them or they like to nibble on them?
[11:27:15] Leo : I think you would try and put the moves on me, buuuuuut lol
[11:28:04] Tinkerbrat : i may just move in your tail >>
[11:28:08] Tinkerbrat : build me a condo....
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Post by Damien on July 30th 2010, 6:34 am

Ahh i get it.. Now time to get things done.. Btw, what would be more attractive?

Humor? Simplicity? or Bombastic words?

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Post by Tinkerbrat on July 30th 2010, 7:05 am

Well, if you went in direction of humor, one could easily use Pirates of the Caribbean as a fine example. O.O Apparently good ol’ Jack Sparrow lives by that motto >.>

Simplicity could be something along the lines as….. say an rpg site such as this one. Apparently by what I read, they just had their 2nd year anniversary! And that’s not including coming from their old hacked site, and look what the staff and members did ^^ They stayed ahead and look this place now ((but I'm sure they would tell anyone the entire process was in no way 'simple'!!))

But what I would advise for you is choose an example that stands out to you specifically…. Write it in a way that represents you as a writer….and use that example you choose to coincide with your own life’s events.

Example? Everytime I fall flat on my face is just like Jimmy Stewart slamming into turn 3 at the final lap just before crossing the finish line…. ><

Now obviously, reaching this point in your life you’ve proved so far that you’re striving to staying ahead in this chaotic game of life o.O So I’m sure you yourself have a lot examples to write about. Just pick something that stands out to you, or that you feel passionate about to use, then go from there ^^

Do we get to read this when your done? :face:

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[11:24:41] Tinkerbrat : Leo... your character have a tail too?
[11:25:07] Leo : Yes , I'm half wolf.
[11:25:18] Leo : Wolf ears, fangs, and even a cute bushy tail lol.
[11:25:22] Leo : True doggy style.
[11:25:40] Tinkerbrat : O.O
[11:26:08] Tinkerbrat : fairies like ears >>
[11:26:21] Leo : they like them or they like to nibble on them?
[11:27:15] Leo : I think you would try and put the moves on me, buuuuuut lol
[11:28:04] Tinkerbrat : i may just move in your tail >>
[11:28:08] Tinkerbrat : build me a condo....
[11:28:30] Leo : Tink, you can do whatever you want to me....
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Post by Damien on July 30th 2010, 7:58 am

Now that's a good example.. hmm thanks tink.. well alright i'll post it up when i'm done..

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