Kitai the Ancient

Name: Kitai

Age: looks around 20 (11291) ( if this now can be accepted. Ancient have a long life)

Gender: male

Home World/World you living in now: Avalon in the unbound world of Alanior

Race/Species: Ancient

Appearance: Kitai is a good looking man, with spiky bright hair. His eyes are icy blue, with a calm look, contaning a endless knowledge if you look deep enough. He usualy wear a white robe.

Alignment: Neutral Good

Elemental Mastery:
Primary: Light
Secondary: Cure
Third: Nothingness
Low skilled: Ink

Personality: Is a very calm person. Don't easily loses temper. Always help those in need. His abilities to keep promises have gained him the title Otahkeeper.

Weapons: He can use almost all types weapons, but have mamstered most light weapons. He don't really like heavy weapons, due to their size and wheight. Only use heavy if there is no other weapon available, but are not good with using them. Meduim weapons is not directly on his top 10 list, but he got good skill using them.


Fighting Style: He stays calm and overlook the situation. Sometimes show of just for the fun of it, unless it's a serious battle.
Uses mostly speed in his attacks, and don't relie on strenght to do the jobb. As a magic user, he like to barrage the foe with pretty powerful, but slow, spells.
Str: average.
Spd: High. 2-3 attacks faster than a average fighter.
Agi: High. Can dodge/evade a lot of attacks. Someone with a heavy 2-hand weap, would have a hard time hiting him. But a light weapon user would have a higher chanse.
Mag: Superior. I wouldn't want to be hit by any of his normal to high ranked spells.

Affinities: He wouldn't call himself a master of arms. But he is good with his favourite weapons of choice, Katana is the weapon he use mostly. His magical abilities is far above avereage. Work well with people he meet, and is very friendly.

Weaknesses: His fast attack makes him use a light cloth robe with low defence. He can handle some average attacks, but recover slow from heavy hits. His spells takes a lot of mana to use, so spellcasting is only used when the oportunity is showing.

History: UA, United Army. Kitai are one of three leaders, conntrolling this army and the world Alanior. Connected with a countless amount of worlds. Avalon serves as a boarder for all of them. After a invasion of beings called Heartless, depopulate almost the whole world, and causing a major crisis. Kitai travels to the world where the beings originate from. With a small force, they are hoping to find a solution to the problem. When they entered the space of the world, all their ships stop working. Engines, weapons, almost everything broke. Kitai called back the other ships en route to their possition. He teleported himself to a nearby planet. Sending back the fleet with a messege to HQ, to wait for him to find a way for them to send backup.

Kitai have been in the UA for the most of his life, protecting the borders. Is famous in most worlds, and have a good archivement list. Reasearching about a new element, he found what he thinks is the most powerful energy ever existing. After starbase Aura was obliterated after a energy spike, the project was abandoned. The base was in orbit above a populated planet wich was shattered into pieces. And no survivors was reported. He have feeled guilt about this a long time, blaming himself for playing a god.

His goal is to find a stop to the Heratless attacking his homeworld.


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by Yue-Iceseal

*I'm done(I think)*
*>.< this started well. *facepalm* accidentaly pressed the quote button when I was going to edit it*

You're not supposed to post incomplete work. Next time you need to save the draft to your computer's hard drive.

Er, next time please use the edit function, thanks.

Ok, I'm done. *got the feeling he have to fix a lot in it, dunno what tbh*

Nobody actually knows what the UA is other than the fact that it's fictional, so you shouldn't refer to it other than in your history or homeworld, and several other stuff. I don't know how strong high ranked mages in the UA are, for example. And you need a physical weakness, and if you're good at magic and at fighting with weapons, you need something to balance it out. It's okay to be good at all weapons but not a master of absolutely one of them as long as you aren't extremely good or anything. I need a description of his strength, how fast he can run, just how good at magic he is, his ability to withstand hits, his ability to withstand pain, stuff like that. And also, his magical resistance.

Weaknesses: He trust mostly everyone he meet, making people with dark intentions easily act friendly towards him and then make a suprise attack. <--- this makes absolutely no sense at all, I don't know how you trusting others makes them instantly vulnerable to your surprise attack, and I don't know how you know they have dark intentions at all.

edited it. *still got a feeling he have to fix a few things*

I would expect a lot more work put in to it, but meh, approved. Welcome to the site.

Thx ^^