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Post by Professor Serin on February 8th 2017, 12:57 am

Name: Plague-Bubble

Lvl. 1 Effect
MP Cost: 100 MP
Element(s): Ink, Rose/Plant, Darkness
Range: 5 Meters
Description: Serin may create a giant boil that can be up to 5 meters in diameter and up to 2 meters in height on a surface. It is in the form of a dome. It acts as a proximity mine and within an opponent coming within 5 meters of it, it will explode with a heavy puss and deal damage aligned with the spell's elements. The residual fluids of the boil will spread across the proximity, indicating that it indeed has a proximity.


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Post by Hoshiko on February 8th 2017, 8:33 pm

reduce the proximity to 3 meters.

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Post by Professor Serin on February 8th 2017, 10:46 pm

Can I increase this proximity via the levels? I assume all aspects become stronger in the later levels.

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Post by Hoshiko on February 10th 2017, 3:29 pm

Yes.

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Post by Professor Serin on February 10th 2017, 10:07 pm

Donezo.

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Post by Hoshiko on February 10th 2017, 10:12 pm

Add an indication for the proximity range.

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Post by Professor Serin on February 10th 2017, 10:15 pm

Done

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Post by Hoshiko on February 10th 2017, 10:30 pm

Approved.

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Post by Hoshiko on March 2nd 2017, 7:41 pm

Unapproved due to changes.

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Post by Professor Serin on March 2nd 2017, 11:39 pm

Fixed

didn't indicate the exact amount of damage because I assume damage-dealing spells just translate to their cost, as I couldn't find a fluid way of describing how much damage it deals.

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Post by Hoshiko on March 3rd 2017, 12:22 am

You need to specify the damage, as the cost is affected by different variables such as range and duration and whatnot.

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Post by Professor Serin on March 3rd 2017, 1:25 am

uh do you mind helping me figure out the wording without being confusing?

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Post by Hoshiko on March 3rd 2017, 2:27 am

With the range being so large, it would likely, at best, do minor damage.

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Post by Professor Serin on March 3rd 2017, 9:20 pm

I definitely disagree with 6 meters being a large range and it only doing minor damage for 100 MP. Seeing as minor is 5-15 MP. That is super weak, and for the size and range given, that costs at least 85 MP?

How do I make it deal the full 100 MP while also maintaining the Mine-like style instead of making it projectile? Which because they have to come within range, has the trade off of possibly never working simply by staying away from it as it isn't a moving object.

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Post by Professor Serin on March 3rd 2017, 9:22 pm

WHOOPS I FORGOT I PUT THE EXPLOSION AS 20 METERS

would it be fine if the range was equal to the proximity that triggers it

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Post by Hoshiko on March 3rd 2017, 9:28 pm

Yes, the explosion radius can be five meters. I'd say the damage would be around average.

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Post by Professor Serin on March 5th 2017, 10:06 pm

How can I change it to be at least 50 MP worth of damage? Still seems very weak as that's still only 20-30 MP worth of damage, following the conversion.

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Post by Hoshiko on March 7th 2017, 11:14 am

The range is pretty large, being 10 meters or 30 feet. It's a large area of effect spell that is triggered (it also needs a duration, now that I realize it). Reduce the size and proximity, or up the cost.

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