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Post by Liandry on February 1st 2017, 9:58 pm

Name: Crimson Flare

Lvl. 1 Effect
MP Cost:25 mp
Element(s):Fire
Range:Long range
Description:

Liandry is able to conjure a blast of fire from her hand. Creating a moderately sized projectile forwards from her hands in a high average speed. On impact the fireball deals a moderate major amount damage in moderately average area. She can choose to delay the blast for two post after it lands before detonating it remotely.

Lvl. 2 Effect
MP Cost: 55
Element(s):Fire
Range: Long Range
Description:
Liandry is able to conjure a powerful blast of fire from her hand. Creating a high moderate sized projectile forwards from her hands in a moderate major average speed. On hit the fireball deals a high major amount of damage on it and expends into explosion in a large area from impact. After the impact the area which is hit contentiously to heats the area and deals a high average amounts for three posts extra to that area.

Lvl. 3 Effect
MP Cost: 100 mp
Element(s): Fire
Range:
Description:
Liandry is able to conjure a powerful blast of fire from her hand. Creating a high moderate sized projectile forwards from her hands in a high major speed. On hit the fireball deals a Moderate extreme amount of damage on it and expends into explosion in a huge area from impact.

After the impact the area which is hit contentiously to heats the area and then spreads into a larger area, further into whatever it hit and deals a high moderate amounts for three posts extra to that area.

Anytime during those three posts Liandry can trigger up to three more explosions per post of the same size and power of the level 2 version of this spell within the heated area. Each blast can then expend the heated area and allow the trigger zone for future explosions to occur.


Last edited by Liandry on February 3rd 2017, 2:26 pm; edited 2 times in total

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STR 5 | AGI 3 | CON 3 | MAG 5 | SYN 0 || Level 3
Light | Fire | Time | Plant
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Post by Gemini on February 2nd 2017, 10:43 am

Seven posts is way too much. Bump it down to three and this is good to go.
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Post by Liandry on February 2nd 2017, 2:36 pm

edited

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Legacy Character: 24000 words left using
STR 5 | AGI 3 | CON 3 | MAG 5 | SYN 0 || Level 3
Light | Fire | Time | Plant
Crimson Flare 94f2d673-7bd6-4479-a337-f10a65020e8e_zps63303dae
Liandry
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The Valkyrie

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Post by Gemini on February 2nd 2017, 2:49 pm

Approved.
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Post by Gemini on February 3rd 2017, 4:42 am

Upon further consideration, you'll need to alter this. You have too many effects. It's supposed to be like this:

Lvl 1: One effect
Lvl 2: One upgraded (or same) effect, additional effect
Lvl 3: One upgraded (or same) effect, two additional effects
Example:
Lvl 1: Fireball
Lvl 2: Fireball that debuffs
Lvl 3: Fireball that debuffs and does status effect

Please remove some effects.
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Post by Liandry on February 3rd 2017, 2:27 pm

edited and adjust the power to compensate

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Legacy Character: 24000 words left using
STR 5 | AGI 3 | CON 3 | MAG 5 | SYN 0 || Level 3
Light | Fire | Time | Plant
Crimson Flare 94f2d673-7bd6-4479-a337-f10a65020e8e_zps63303dae
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Post by Gemini on February 3rd 2017, 2:31 pm

Reapproved.
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Post by Hoshiko on March 2nd 2017, 8:25 pm

Unapproved due to changes. Spell levels are no longer in use.

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